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Akuma. The lighting is off, I'm hoping to fix it in color.

tell me what y'all think.

DKY

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:icon47ness:
I see what you mean about it being off, but you can totally have multiple light sources as well for the final. :nod:

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:iconskydisaster:
BADASS Job on this one bro! I agree with 47ness ... I think it'll be just fine ;):thumbsup:

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:iconbolognafingers:
Looks good man, nice details. A couple things that I think might make it a bit stronger are if you had fewer highlight areas in his hair, picking a larger area that would make for a larger shadow shape as opposed to an even distribution of highlights and shadows. The other thing is the anatomy on his right arm looks off a bit, the upper part of the arm curves down too much and the lower part it looks as if the bend near where the wrist is, is up too high on the forearm. The rest of it looks really good, I like the rendering a lot. I think that your style is coming along.

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:iconmindintomatter:
I think that if you tighten up your anatomy you could be a serious threat as a penciller
:iconblaw81:
Thanks man.
keep the suggestions coming.
late June, we gonna hang out?
:iconblaw81:
Thanks man, yeah, Ill mess around with it a little more, or pay more attention in the future. as for the high lights, I see what you mean about getting the curve of the head would make the highlights drop off into the shadow.

Still need to focus on quantity, I'm still way too nervous about making that first line.
:iconbolognafingers:
I hear ya, I think you just have to dive in and let loose.

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:iconmindintomatter:
I'm not going anywhere. email me some dates and I'll email you some digits. my address is on my page

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