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Akuma Pencils by ~Blaw81:iconBlaw81:

Categories Manga/Anime > Traditional Media > Drawings

©2009 ~Blaw81
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Artist's Comments

Akuma. The lighting is off, I'm hoping to fix it in color.

tell me what y'all think.

DKY

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*47ness Jun 7, 2009, 6:50:07 PM
I see what you mean about it being off, but you can totally have multiple light sources as well for the final. :nod:

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*SkyDisaster Jun 8, 2009, 8:37:46 AM
BADASS Job on this one bro! I agree with 47ness ... I think it'll be just fine ;):thumbsup:

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*bolognafingers Jun 8, 2009, 12:16:15 PM
Looks good man, nice details. A couple things that I think might make it a bit stronger are if you had fewer highlight areas in his hair, picking a larger area that would make for a larger shadow shape as opposed to an even distribution of highlights and shadows. The other thing is the anatomy on his right arm looks off a bit, the upper part of the arm curves down too much and the lower part it looks as if the bend near where the wrist is, is up too high on the forearm. The rest of it looks really good, I like the rendering a lot. I think that your style is coming along.

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~mindintomatter Jun 8, 2009, 3:16:55 PM
I think that if you tighten up your anatomy you could be a serious threat as a penciller
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~Blaw81 Jun 9, 2009, 12:02:22 AM
Thanks man.
keep the suggestions coming.
late June, we gonna hang out?
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~Blaw81 Jun 9, 2009, 12:08:59 AM
Thanks man, yeah, Ill mess around with it a little more, or pay more attention in the future. as for the high lights, I see what you mean about getting the curve of the head would make the highlights drop off into the shadow.

Still need to focus on quantity, I'm still way too nervous about making that first line.
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*bolognafingers Jun 9, 2009, 3:30:54 AM
I hear ya, I think you just have to dive in and let loose.

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~mindintomatter Jun 9, 2009, 8:39:08 PM
I'm not going anywhere. email me some dates and I'll email you some digits. my address is on my page
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